dancing in the moonlight

Carpe Diem "Make The Haiku Complete" (100) encore, just for fun. "dancing in the moonlight"


fireflies
dancing in the moonlight
sky write a message

©  petra domina


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  1. Adas AlcoveNovember 6, 2016 at 3:07 AM

    Nicely done! I was thinking of fireflies too but couldn't come up with a third line.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanNovember 6, 2016 at 3:09 AM

    Hari OM
    ... so prettily too! YAM xx

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  3. UnknownNovember 6, 2016 at 9:10 AM

    A beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?

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    1. JaniceNovember 8, 2016 at 6:57 PM

      I struggled with that. With fireflies plural, writes would be singular verb therefore not agreeing with the noun. I actually had the fireflies as singular (firefly) at first which would make writes the proper verb for noun/verb agreement.

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  4. UnknownNovember 6, 2016 at 9:10 AM

    A beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 6, 2016 at 11:00 PM

    I love this haiku, you have completed it in a nice way.

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  6. Kim M. RussellNovember 7, 2016 at 6:04 AM

    I was going to write one with fireflies and changed my mind - glad I did - yours is lovely!

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  7. TournesolNovember 7, 2016 at 3:36 PM

    Oh yes!! such a stunning completion!!

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  8. JaniceNovember 8, 2016 at 6:57 PM

    Thank you Helene.

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