Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight instantly flaming candles fill the sky a new year instantly warm lips meet melting the cold flaming candles fill the sky smoke fills the air stars obscured a new year corks pop as flutes clink a sea of people © petra domina To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work: "Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers, Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops". Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year. Here are the two haiku to work with: a new year rising from wild seas a few stars filling the glass with candlelight champ
Hari OM
ReplyDeletePretty... YAM xx
Thank you, Ms. YAM. janice xx
DeleteSuch a serene scene
ReplyDeleteIf I change voices in the first line that would make it more about love...... I will get this yet.
DeleteI like the ambiguity of the first line, Janice - those muffled sounds could be lovers!
DeleteWell, it could be. This hidden love poem is tricky! Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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