dancing in the moonlight
Carpe Diem "Make The Haiku Complete" (100) encore, just for fun. "dancing in the moonlight"
fireflies
dancing in the moonlight
sky write a message
© petra domina
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waiting for autumn
Carpe Diem #1227 waiting for autumn (Aki tikashi, Aki wo matsu) in the summer heat perching black birds pant waiting for autumn © petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
Nicely done! I was thinking of fireflies too but couldn't come up with a third line.
ReplyDeleteThe lines were a while coming.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDelete... so prettily too! YAM xx
Thank you, friend. janice xx
DeleteA beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?
ReplyDeleteI struggled with that. With fireflies plural, writes would be singular verb therefore not agreeing with the noun. I actually had the fireflies as singular (firefly) at first which would make writes the proper verb for noun/verb agreement.
DeleteA beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?
ReplyDeleteI love this haiku, you have completed it in a nice way.
ReplyDeleteHigh praise, my master.
DeleteI was going to write one with fireflies and changed my mind - glad I did - yours is lovely!
ReplyDeleteYour comment makes me blush.
DeleteOh yes!! such a stunning completion!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Cheryl-Lynn
DeleteThank you Helene.
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