low sunlight

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #5 low sunlight


silloutted
against the evening sky
a single pillar
casts its long shadow
across the waiting valley 

©  petra domina



in the low sunlight
longing eyes softly touching
from across the room
heartbeats hastening
old lovers' tryst

©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

Comments

  1. Helene VaillantNovember 4, 2016 at 5:26 PM

    Two perfect tanka.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanNovember 4, 2016 at 8:02 PM

    Hari OM
    What contrast! YAM xx

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  3. AnonymousNovember 4, 2016 at 8:23 PM

    Lovely.

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 5, 2016 at 1:43 AM

    Awesome set of tanka Janice. I like them both very much, but inyour second I read true love.

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    1. JaniceNovember 5, 2016 at 7:14 PM

      The first was just raw passion it seems. And I was thinking of my sweet husband in the second. Thank you for taking time to visit and leaving your encouraging comments.

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  5. JaniceNovember 8, 2016 at 7:00 PM

    Thank you, Dolores.

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  6. purplepeninportland.comNovember 8, 2016 at 9:44 PM

    Wonderful, romantic tanka, Janice!

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