Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight instantly flaming candles fill the sky a new year instantly warm lips meet melting the cold flaming candles fill the sky smoke fills the air stars obscured a new year corks pop as flutes clink a sea of people © petra domina To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work: "Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers, Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops". Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year. Here are the two haiku to work with: a new year rising from wild seas a few stars filling the glass with candlelight champ
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ReplyDelete"Bare branch forest on the move".... perfect!!! YAM xx
That was the phrase that jumped into my mind when I watched the video on your post. See you inspired the tanka! janice xx
DeleteBeautiful tanka. I really enjoyed watching the video. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteThat video was really good! Glad you enjoyed. Thanks.
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DeleteSuperb in every way. Great tanka. Sorry for typo in previous comment. I use smartphone and small screen.
ReplyDeleteI do not even try to use a phone to reply. Fat fingers make for ... unusual responses ; )
DeleteSuperb in every way. Great tanka. Sorry for typo in previous comment. I use smartphone and small screen.
ReplyDeleteThis video was very inspiring for you Janice. Very nice tanka. "bare branch forest on the move" awesome line ..
ReplyDeleteA blogger friend in Scotland had posted it on her sight and I was immediately to write. That line is the first thing that came to mind... Muses were speaking loudly that evening! thank you for you kind comment.
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