bare branches
Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #4 Teika's 2nd Tanka Writing Technique "Appropriate statement" - prompt: bare branches
scampering
along the bare branches
with a tail raised
gathers acorns in his jaws
fills a hole with his seed
© petra domina
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Hari OM
ReplyDeleteI 'see' him!!! YAM xx
Cute little thing. janice xx
DeleteYes, imagery is perfect.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hélène.
Deletethats truly flowing with the vivid imagery !
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteDo many squirrels here, each with their own character. Really fun little creatures.
ReplyDeleteYes they are. The question is did you get the hidden meaning that could be a love message? Or did I miss the mark again?
DeleteWow Janice what a beautiful tanka. This scene is almost visible in front of my eyes. Great.
ReplyDeleteAs I responded to Hamish, I missed the romantic poem.
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