Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight instantly flaming candles fill the sky a new year instantly warm lips meet melting the cold flaming candles fill the sky smoke fills the air stars obscured a new year corks pop as flutes clink a sea of people © petra domina To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work: "Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers, Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops". Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year. Here are the two haiku to work with: a new year rising from wild seas a few stars filling the glass with candlelight champ
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ReplyDeleteI 'see' him!!! YAM xx
Cute little thing. janice xx
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ReplyDeleteThank you, Hélène.
Deletethats truly flowing with the vivid imagery !
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DeleteDo many squirrels here, each with their own character. Really fun little creatures.
ReplyDeleteYes they are. The question is did you get the hidden meaning that could be a love message? Or did I miss the mark again?
DeleteWow Janice what a beautiful tanka. This scene is almost visible in front of my eyes. Great.
ReplyDeleteAs I responded to Hamish, I missed the romantic poem.
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