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Summertime

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  Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #1845 Troiku Challenge: Summertime   Today's challenge from our host is to create a troiku using his own haiku for the primary source. at the seashore wind of summer through my hair the shortest night © Chèvrefeuille at the seashore clamoring sound of gulls punctuate the air wind of summer through my hair taste of salt on my tongue soothing warmth of the sand the shortest night daybreak comes all too soon gulls at work again © petra domina Follow this link to see other contributions to the troiku challenge. Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for hosting Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

candle light

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Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight instantly flaming candles fill the sky a new year instantly warm lips meet melting the cold flaming candles fill the sky smoke fills the air stars obscured a new year corks pop as flutes clink a sea of people © petra domina To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work: "Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers, Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops". Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year. Here are the two haiku to work with: a new year rising from wild seas a few stars filling the glass with candlelight champ...

birthday

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Carpe Diem #1799 New Beginnings ... a huge wave (Crossroads feature) "Today I have chosen two haiku written by her ( Jane Reichhold)  and I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" and with that "fusion-ku" a Troiku ... (more on Troiku above in the menu). Here are the two haiku by Jane to work with: a huge wave thundering across the beach my birthday sky-clad the new-born comes wrapped in previous lives © Jane Reichhold (extracted from the online Saijiki "A Dictionary Of Haiku", section "New Year")" pain filled wave the future is now crowned as grandma smiles pain filled wave engulfing all who stand near just breathe the future is now crowned in the pink, chubby fist mom's finger as grandma smiles dreaming of future adventures seeing the past in that face © petra domina As I read the challenge and the two haiku I thought of my husband's birth.  He is in his 80th year.  ...

crystal dewdrops

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Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday (4) crystal dewdrops (hineri / with a twist) distant lightning reflect on storm clouds rainy night delight                             (petra domina) pink morning glory in full bloom covered with crystal dewdrops                         © Chèvrefeuille If you enjoy haiku and other forms of Japanese poetry be sure to visit: CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

rain

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Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #89 Extreme Haibun ... rain An extreme haibun is a haibun with prose and poetry together, a kind of symbiosis so to say.  Our host gave the  theme and challenge to create an extreme haibun with a maximum of 100 words including the poems. For this extreme haibun  Chèvrefeuille gave  the theme "RAIN". Create a haibun themed rain and share it with all at our Haiku Kai. ____________________________ In the summer after chores were done my afternoons would be free.  I would lay on my bed with the windows open listening to rock and roll on the radio.  The curtains were purple sheers.  The smell of the approaching rain was so fresh.  Almost heavenly. summer breeze ruffled  priscilla curtains gently flutter summer breeze carries the sound distant thunder priscilla curtain ruffles dreams of prince charming a raindrop kiss gentle flutters young heart fills with hope sweet smell fills the roo...

moonlit night

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Carpe Diem #1681 Troiku Month (10) moonlit night This is the haiku to work with to build a troiku : the wild geese take flight low along the railroad tracks in the moonlit night © Masaoka Shiki _________________________________ the wild geese take flight above the silver threads lonely whistle blows low along the rails fog churned by massive wheels dusty cinders fall in the moonlit night geese honk of sights yet to see © petra domina

spiderwebs

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Carpe Diem #1679 Troiku Month (8) spiderweb Today troiku challenge from our host,  Chèvrefeuille,   is the following modern haiku: Spiderweb anchored To a tree, a bush, the ground Centered spiral shines © Calvin Olson (2016) ____________________________ Spiderweb anchored swaying gently in the breeze bee escapes            surprised walker            To a tree, a bush, t he ground             escaping the web                                                               Centered spiral shines                           unnoticed by the gnat                           final du...

unlocked fence

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Carpe Diem #1678 Troiku Month (7) Unlocked Fence unlocked fence walking towards the countryside finally free © Chèvrefeuille Here is the inspiration photo: Unlocked Fence Fences are a hot topic in my nation these days. The subjects of how high, how long and how much it will cost are in the news almost daily.  There is no mention of gates, only the fence. unlocked fence beckons one to come inside clang of gate    walk across the countryside    miles stretch across horizon    sun drains all but hope       finally free?       the child is taken       from parent's arms             © petra domina          

chasing a fly

Carpe Diem #1677 Troiku Month (6) Chasing A Fly I need for you to go read the original challenge post to fully appreciate the genius of Chèvrefeuille.  He has been my inspiration and guide in the way of haiku.  Thanks be to Chèvrefeuille. Challenge haiku: chasing a fly in silent meditation mode eyes fixed © Chèvrefeuille ------------------------------------------------ About 4 decades ago we were sitting in a restaurant with my parents and our young son.  Suddenly our son shouts, "There is a fly in my tea".  Rather than allow him to further disturb the entire restaurant, we all shushed him.  But there was no shushing this young man.  In even a louder voice he yells, "No, really, THERE IS A FLY IN MY TEA."  This time I responded I would get him a new glass of tea.  That calmed him.  If only as a mom I had remained calm and addressed the real problem, a fly in his tea, there would have been no further interruptions. chasing...

aroma of pine

Carpe Diem #1676 Troiku Month (5) the aroma of pine the aroma of pine and the young morning's fresh rain reach my words © Hamish "Managua" Gunn (Taken from "Shinrin Yoku, the art of forest bathing") the aroma of pine is just not the same from a spray can morn's fresh rain trickles from the trees cleanses the mind reach my words oh, love of my life with fiery bliss © petra domina

sea cliffs

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Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #88 Crossroads ... Sea Cliffs The challen ge from our host,  Chèvrefeuille,  is to fuse the following two haiku into one.  Then create a troiku from the fusion.  Here are the two haiku to use for your "fusion-haiku": coming to sea cliffs the off-shore breeze raises a flower fragrance curving with the land a rainbow of clouds moves out to sea © Jane Reichhold (Taken from: "A Dictionary of Haiku", a Modern Saijiki) sea cliffs awash with flower fragrance rainbow mist forms   sea cliffs   rise above the pounding surf   puffin nests      awash      with flower fragrance      humble trellis         rainbow mist forms         papa puffin dives for food         sea cliff nursery             © petra domina Not a puffin 😁

a distant mountain

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Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #40 Troiku Challenge "a distant mountain" " ...For this Troiku Challenge I have chosen two haiku by Takahama Kyoshi (1874–1959) to work with. Kyoshi is not a renown haiku poet, but he has written wonderful haiku. (You can find more of his haiku  HERE ). a distant mountain seen in the sunlight: a desolate field a leaf of a paulownia tree has fallen in the sunlight © Takahama Kyoshi (Tr. Katsuya Hiromoto) Two nice haiku. Not easy to work with I think, but ... I think you can do it. Create a "fusion"-haiku from these two haiku and than create a Troiku with your "fusion"-haiku...." a small leaf held against the sunlight distant mountain view a small leaf    gently drifts across the           the sunrise against the sunlight     Orion moves unseen           sky hunter distant mountain     viewed from the desolate plane    ...

time

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Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #37 Troiku Challenge "Time" pink snow falling from the cherry tree nude bodies quiver             pink snow             melting into the earth             earthworm revels                           instantly                           falling from the cherry tree                           petals fill the air                                                                  cupid's arrow                             ...

weekend meditation

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Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #16 Only The First Line "steel blue night" Our host gave us a choice of five different first lines with which o be inspired and write a haiku.  I chose 'with the passing spring'.  He, also, challenged us to write a troiku using the first line, lost in the corn field. with the passing spring weathered oak once more buds shiny leaves abound ©    petra domina lost in the corn field small whirlwind gathers withered stalks lost in the corn field the fledgling calls in vain vulture circles small whirlwind gathers strenght dusty funnel withered stalks trampled in the stampede worm fodder ©    petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI  

daily bread

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Carpe Diem #1258 daily bread Bakery baking day yeasty smell fills the air crunch of crust herbed olive oil dribbles down the chin ©    petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI  

hundred gourds

Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #2 Troiku "a hundred gourds" in my garden starflowers bloom come and see © Chiyo-Ni (age 6) in my garden early morning dewy dampness starflowers bloom with a happy smile welcome the bee come and see gathered nectar  becomes a comb ©    petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI