South Padre Island

South Padre Island

Thursday, November 3, 2016

reindeer







Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #4 Teika's 2nd Tanka Writing Technique "Appropriate statement" - prompt: bare branches


following the light
reindeer seek the warmth of sun
travel as one
across the frozen tundra
bare branch forest on the move

©  petra domina



Moving with the reindeer in the winter. © Jan Helmer Olsen Karasjok from Jan Helmer Olsen on Vimeo.


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

11 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    "Bare branch forest on the move".... perfect!!! YAM xx

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    1. That was the phrase that jumped into my mind when I watched the video on your post. See you inspired the tanka! janice xx

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  2. Beautiful tanka. I really enjoyed watching the video. Thank you for sharing it.

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    1. That video was really good! Glad you enjoyed. Thanks.

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  3. Superb in every way. Great tanka. Sorry for typo in previous comment. I use smartphone and small screen.

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    1. I do not even try to use a phone to reply. Fat fingers make for ... unusual responses ; )

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  4. Superb in every way. Great tanka. Sorry for typo in previous comment. I use smartphone and small screen.

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  5. This video was very inspiring for you Janice. Very nice tanka. "bare branch forest on the move" awesome line ..

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    1. A blogger friend in Scotland had posted it on her sight and I was immediately to write. That line is the first thing that came to mind... Muses were speaking loudly that evening! thank you for you kind comment.

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