pilgrimage

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #30 pilgrimage


the beginning
one sole strikes the cobblestone
then the next
a path to be walked alone
within one's own soul

©  petra domina

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  1. Yamini MacLeanDecember 2, 2016 at 2:31 AM

    Hari om
    Simply true... YAMxx

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    1. JaniceDecember 2, 2016 at 4:03 PM

      that is what came to my mind, also. janice xx

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 8, 2016 at 5:36 PM

    A nice tanka Janice in which you describe the inner struggle of a pilgrim. Nicely done.

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