waltz of the flowers

the bed
covered in rose petals
stands
awaiting
lovers' waltz

©  petra domina



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CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


Comments

  1. UnknownDecember 5, 2016 at 1:34 AM

    Oh dear...with that kind of mood hope the lovers can make it to the bed!

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  2. Yamini MacLeanDecember 5, 2016 at 4:06 AM

    Hari Om
    Pure romance... YAM xx

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    1. JaniceDecember 5, 2016 at 2:02 PM

      There may be snow on the roof but still a flame in the heart!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 5, 2016 at 9:04 AM

    Oooo,la,la ;-)

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  4. lynn__December 5, 2016 at 9:36 AM

    Rose petaled waltz...Lover-ly!

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 11, 2016 at 1:21 PM

    Very romantic tanka Janice ... I like the sensuality that builts up in this poem. Thank you!

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