autumn departs

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #28 Teika's Tenth Tanka Writing Technique "Demon-quelling" (prompt: autumn departs)


gusty wind
pulling at the last leaf
a gargoyle hand
casts a shadow 
on the fallen leaves

©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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  1. Yamini MacLeanDecember 2, 2016 at 2:37 AM

    Hari om
    Grasping tightly
    Shakes them into disarray
    Then was gone
    YAMxx

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  2. JaniceDecember 2, 2016 at 4:05 PM

    Love it when you respond with a continuation! janice xx

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