the river flows Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps June 05, 2016 Carpe Diem Special #209 "ripple in the lake" by Joyce Lorenson the river flows along the city's shoreline caressing her lights © petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments hamishJune 6, 2016 at 12:42 AM Now that is a gorgeous haiku, with subtle sensuality. ReplyDeleteRepliesJaniceJune 6, 2016 at 3:00 PMHamish, thanks for the high praise.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyUnknownJune 7, 2016 at 1:15 AMOh lala...funny I read "caressing her thighs" at first :DReplyDeleteRepliesJaniceJune 7, 2016 at 2:36 PMNothing like a little dyslexia for some fun! DeleteRepliesReplyTournesolDansUnJardinJune 8, 2016 at 1:30 AMIt almost looks like the light is dancing on the water.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyCarol CampbellJune 7, 2016 at 9:12 AMI love that!ReplyDeleteRepliesJaniceJune 7, 2016 at 2:37 PMI loved the lights reflecting on the rivers!DeleteRepliesReplyReplyChèvrefeuilleJune 26, 2016 at 10:00 PMBeautiful and in a way sensual ...ReplyDeleteRepliesJaniceJuly 3, 2016 at 8:37 PMit is just what came to my mind remembering the beautiful lights on the Danube.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
Now that is a gorgeous haiku, with subtle sensuality.
ReplyDeleteHamish, thanks for the high praise.
DeleteOh lala...funny I read "caressing her thighs" at first :D
ReplyDeleteNothing like a little dyslexia for some fun!
DeleteIt almost looks like the light is dancing on the water.
DeleteI love that!
ReplyDeleteI loved the lights reflecting on the rivers!
DeleteBeautiful and in a way sensual ...
ReplyDeleteit is just what came to my mind remembering the beautiful lights on the Danube.
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