by the mountain spring

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #104 "by the mountain spring" by Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė


Walking in the quiet of the forest with hands gently touching.  The breeze rustles the leaves of the silver maple sending flashes of grey and green.  The binary code of the forest.  Words without sounds.  There, near the spring, stands a once mighty oak.  Dead now with a dried up heart.  The two continue to walk in the silence of the words.

by the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words

© Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė

the lips say kiss but the eyes
speak of revolution!

© petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

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  1. humbirdJune 24, 2016 at 7:04 PM

    Yes! Sounds as classic quote! Great haibun!

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  2. Kim M. RussellJune 25, 2016 at 1:53 AM

    The speech of lips and eyes is often different! An interesting completion of the tanka.

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  3. AnonymousJune 25, 2016 at 11:09 AM

    oh lovely haibun! :)

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  4. TournesolDansUnJardinJune 30, 2016 at 7:27 PM

    This is one of your best, Janice and they are hard to choose from...very thought provoking...your narrative is so evocative.

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