the river flows

Carpe Diem Special #209 "ripple in the lake" by Joyce Lorenson


the river flows
along the city's shoreline
caressing her lights

© petra domina



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  1. hamishJune 6, 2016 at 12:42 AM

    Now that is a gorgeous haiku, with subtle sensuality.

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  2. UnknownJune 7, 2016 at 1:15 AM

    Oh lala...funny I read "caressing her thighs" at first :D

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    1. JaniceJune 7, 2016 at 2:36 PM

      Nothing like a little dyslexia for some fun!

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    2. TournesolDansUnJardinJune 8, 2016 at 1:30 AM

      It almost looks like the light is dancing on the water.

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  3. Carol CampbellJune 7, 2016 at 9:12 AM

    I love that!

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    1. JaniceJune 7, 2016 at 2:37 PM

      I loved the lights reflecting on the rivers!

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleJune 26, 2016 at 10:00 PM

    Beautiful and in a way sensual ...

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    1. JaniceJuly 3, 2016 at 8:37 PM

      it is just what came to my mind remembering the beautiful lights on the Danube.

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