rain

Carpe Diem #933 Rain


rain falling
in a spring storm
diagonally

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

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  1. ChèvrefeuilleMarch 8, 2016 at 5:49 AM

    Very nice shasei haiku Janice

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  2. UnknownMarch 8, 2016 at 11:51 AM

    Simplicity is what I like most in haiku. This really fit the task.

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    1. JaniceMarch 10, 2016 at 9:11 AM

      Thanks, Hamish. Your critique has been so much help in improving my writings.

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    2. JaniceMarch 10, 2016 at 9:11 AM

      Thanks, Hamish. Your critique has been so much help in improving my writings.

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  3. Bastet's Waka LibraryMarch 12, 2016 at 4:26 AM

    :-) great job here! Bastet

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