willow

Carpe Diem #944 willow


The challenge is to use a writing technique, 'response to another's poem'.  The first poem that popped into my mind was 'The Raven' by Edgar Allen Poe.  To read the original poem, click here. 

love fires
consumed in feathered darkness
burns forevermore

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


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  1. UnknownMarch 21, 2016 at 2:10 AM

    Very nicely done Janice, and well-presented: good idea to link.

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    1. JaniceMarch 21, 2016 at 10:35 PM

      Thank you, Hamish. I felt the poem was far too long to include in the post so went for the easy link.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanMarch 21, 2016 at 5:58 AM

    Hari OM
    Spot on! YAM xx

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  3. Bastet's Waka LibraryMarch 23, 2016 at 4:41 AM

    Lovely post :-)

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