narrowing focus

Carpe Diem #934 Onions



awash in sunlight
fields flush with bluebonnets
a bee sips nectar

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


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  1. AnonymousMarch 7, 2016 at 10:38 PM

    This works perfectly for that technique!

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    1. JaniceMarch 10, 2016 at 9:06 AM

      Thank you. It is so wonderful to be able to write about nature!

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  2. kaykualaMarch 8, 2016 at 7:07 AM

    Can almost see the bees going from flower to flower around the bluebonnets.

    Hank

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    1. JaniceMarch 10, 2016 at 9:06 AM

      Hank, glad I was able to paint a mind picture of what we saw just this past weekend.
      Janice

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  3. UnknownMarch 8, 2016 at 11:50 AM

    That is simply a superb haiku m' dear! Really, smiling aside, this IS haiku...so well done.

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    1. JaniceMarch 10, 2016 at 9:09 AM

      Why, thank you my Forest Friend. High praise from you. Just sharing what surrounds me in nature at this time of year.

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  4. Carol CampbellMarch 8, 2016 at 2:55 PM

    A lovely scene!

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibraryMarch 12, 2016 at 4:31 AM

    Lovely Janice. Bastet

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