Monday, March 7, 2016

narrowing focus

Carpe Diem #934 Onions



awash in sunlight
fields flush with bluebonnets
a bee sips nectar

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


10 comments:

  1. This works perfectly for that technique!

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    1. Thank you. It is so wonderful to be able to write about nature!

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  2. Can almost see the bees going from flower to flower around the bluebonnets.

    Hank

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    1. Hank, glad I was able to paint a mind picture of what we saw just this past weekend.
      Janice

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  3. That is simply a superb haiku m' dear! Really, smiling aside, this IS haiku...so well done.

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    1. Why, thank you my Forest Friend. High praise from you. Just sharing what surrounds me in nature at this time of year.

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