end of the road
Carpe Diem #1248 ending road
raindrops
now
floods
© petra domina
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waiting for autumn
Carpe Diem #1227 waiting for autumn (Aki tikashi, Aki wo matsu) in the summer heat perching black birds pant waiting for autumn © petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
One thing leads to another. Nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jilly.
Deleteshort and eloquent
ReplyDeleteYes, short and sweet.
ReplyDeleteMasterful. I remember you did this style a few years back, where you caught everything that needed to be caught in just the essence of the haiku. You did it again, though this time, of course, so pertinent.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hamish. Thought I would try the brief approach again and, yes, timely for this area.
DeleteStunning, Janice!! and even more touching with your reality. Hugs xx
ReplyDeleteThank you, CL. Yes, it was a little too close for comfort.
DeleteYes, we were safe. Just some leaks.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dolores.
ReplyDeleteA nice experimental haiku. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristjaan.
DeleteThe depth ! Wow !
ReplyDeleteSo many these days.
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