end of the road

Carpe Diem #1248 ending road



raindrops
now
floods
©  petra domina


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  1. JillySeptember 3, 2017 at 6:59 PM

    One thing leads to another. Nicely penned!

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  2. humbirdSeptember 3, 2017 at 10:20 PM

    short and eloquent

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  3. Kim M. RussellSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:34 AM

    Yes, short and sweet.

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  4. forestbatherSeptember 4, 2017 at 11:48 AM

    Masterful. I remember you did this style a few years back, where you caught everything that needed to be caught in just the essence of the haiku. You did it again, though this time, of course, so pertinent.

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    1. JaniceSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:40 PM

      Thank you, Hamish. Thought I would try the brief approach again and, yes, timely for this area.

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  5. TournesolSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:22 PM

    Stunning, Janice!! and even more touching with your reality. Hugs xx

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    1. JaniceSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:41 PM

      Thank you, CL. Yes, it was a little too close for comfort.

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  6. JaniceSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:38 PM

    Yes, we were safe. Just some leaks.

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  7. JaniceSeptember 4, 2017 at 1:39 PM

    Thanks, Dolores.

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 4, 2017 at 2:37 PM

    A nice experimental haiku. Thank you for sharing.

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  9. Milan RajkumarSeptember 9, 2017 at 2:26 PM

    The depth ! Wow !

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