stares of nature
Carpe Diem #1254 stairs of nature
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| Stairs of Nature |
above
green
orbs
green
orbs
glaring
earth's strata
exposed to time
stairway for the hind
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petra domina
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
I like this "experimental" haiku ... less words that say so much. Chapeau!
ReplyDeleteAgain, thank you so much for the opportunity to experiment.
DeleteLove your experimental haiku, Janice! I especially enjoyed:
ReplyDelete'earth's strata
exposed to time'.
thanks, Kim. I'm a bit of a rock nutter. so often look for the natural steps created by erosion.
DeleteHari om
ReplyDeleteInteresting, the juxtaposition between stairs/stares (glaring)... YAM xx
My weird mind at work again, thought of eyes in the night. Namaste, Janice xx
DeleteLove the space you create in your haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this. Never noticed the space.
DeleteReally nice "Experimental" Haiku. Will try it for the next image. Thanks
ReplyDeleteIts fun.
Deleteo a serene haiku ! Love the style of writing
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying the minimalist approach for sure.
DeleteThis allowed me to see the strata as worn by a path seeking a higher plane.
ReplyDeleteOH, I like that thought, too!
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