despair

Carpe Diem #1249 despair 



despair
among trees
leaves

©
  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on



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  1. CedarwindSeptember 5, 2017 at 1:54 PM

    It's amazing how brief a haiku can be and still hold much meaning. I feel you capture the image both as a viewer and from the boy's perspective. Janice (ontheland)

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    1. JaniceSeptember 6, 2017 at 11:06 AM

      Thank you for your very kind comment. Janice (the rock lady, aka petra domina)

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  2. Pat RSeptember 5, 2017 at 4:41 PM

    I agree with Janice:)

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  3. JaniceSeptember 6, 2017 at 11:06 AM

    Thank you!

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 6, 2017 at 2:41 PM

    Excellent "free-style" haiku Janice Santoka Taneda would be happy if he could read this one.

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    1. JaniceSeptember 6, 2017 at 8:38 PM

      Thank you so very, very much. High praise from my master.

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