city park
Carpe Diem #1255 City Park
City Park (photo by Chèvrefeuille) |
September in Texas was still hot and dusty as the usual fall rains would not arrive till in October. Playing with cousins on the swings, slides and merry go rounds was such great fun. Being a bit of a tomboy I worried little about sliding 'like a little lady' even though I would be attired in a newly made dress for the occasion. The reunion would end in time for the farmers to go home, milk the cows and attend evening church services.
crinolines
covered
in dusty fun
sleepy eyes droop
to the pastor's voice
covered
in dusty fun
sleepy eyes droop
to the pastor's voice
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
1962 one of the last of the Rogers' reunions. Kids could wear shorts by now.
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Ah, I like this story, your haibun inspired by the memory of reunions. Nice tanka.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed and hope it brought back good memories.
DeleteI love an autobiographical haibun with a bit of history, especially in what is for me a faraway place!
ReplyDeleteSo pleased you enjoyed my bit of memory. It was time before concrete consumed so many of the beautiful, fertile farms.
DeleteA lovely walk down memory lane. I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you came along for the walk. It makes it more pleasurable even for me.
DeleteYou are at your endearing best when you dwelve into haibun. Fits you like a glove somehow and is eminently readable. I really took part in this, with all senses, and it has a lingering effect like good tea, coffee, or rum.
ReplyDeleteInteresting about shorts - in Scotland it was the reverse, and my uncle was frequently sent home for wearing long trousers to school in the snow, and told to wear shorts...only the Scots are capable of such logic!
The shorts made me laugh. I would love to visit Scotland. My familial roots supposedly trace to Scotch Irish homelands.
DeleteI enjoy sharing the little bits of memories from the times of my youth. I certainly do not want to go back to the hate and discrimination of those times though at times it appears about 35% of my nation does. Thank you, again, for your encouraging words.
I love those sweet memories ... your haibun is really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kristjaan.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteFondness! Love the bloggy makeover too.... YAM xx
Well, it felt like time for some fall colors. Namaste, Janice xx
ReplyDeleteNice memory, nice life, nice family. I really enjoyed your tanka prose. Thanks for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteIt was a nice life. Not perfect but mostly good. Glad you liked the tanka.
Deletethis is a classic haibun ! the old stories of cotton fields lingers like a ghost !it's going to be a part of history !
ReplyDeleteYes, they do. There are still a few cotton fields in the area. Thanks for stopping by and commentins.
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