I like this "experimental" haiku ... less words that say so much. Chapeau!
Again, thank you so much for the opportunity to experiment.
Love your experimental haiku, Janice! I especially enjoyed:'earth's strataexposed to time'.
thanks, Kim. I'm a bit of a rock nutter. so often look for the natural steps created by erosion.
Hari omInteresting, the juxtaposition between stairs/stares (glaring)... YAM xx
My weird mind at work again, thought of eyes in the night. Namaste, Janice xx
Love the space you create in your haiku.
Thank you for this. Never noticed the space.
Really nice "Experimental" Haiku. Will try it for the next image. Thanks
o a serene haiku ! Love the style of writing
I am enjoying the minimalist approach for sure.
This allowed me to see the strata as worn by a path seeking a higher plane.
OH, I like that thought, too!