Tuesday, September 12, 2017

stares of nature

Carpe Diem #1254 stairs of nature


Stairs of Nature

above
green
orbs


green
orbs
glaring


earth's strata
exposed to time
stairway for the hind

©
  petra domina


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI



14 comments:

  1. I like this "experimental" haiku ... less words that say so much. Chapeau!

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    1. Again, thank you so much for the opportunity to experiment.

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  2. Love your experimental haiku, Janice! I especially enjoyed:
    'earth's strata
    exposed to time'.

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    1. thanks, Kim. I'm a bit of a rock nutter. so often look for the natural steps created by erosion.

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  3. Hari om
    Interesting, the juxtaposition between stairs/stares (glaring)... YAM xx

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    1. My weird mind at work again, thought of eyes in the night. Namaste, Janice xx

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  4. Love the space you create in your haiku.

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    1. Thank you for this. Never noticed the space.

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  5. Really nice "Experimental" Haiku. Will try it for the next image. Thanks

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  6. o a serene haiku ! Love the style of writing

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    1. I am enjoying the minimalist approach for sure.

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  7. This allowed me to see the strata as worn by a path seeking a higher plane.

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