Summertime

 Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #1845 Troiku Challenge: Summertime

 

Today's challenge from our host is to create a troiku using his own haiku for the primary source.

at the seashore
wind of summer through my hair
the shortest night

© Chèvrefeuille

at the seashore
clamoring sound of gulls
punctuate the air

wind of summer through my hair
taste of salt on my tongue
soothing warmth of the sand

the shortest night
daybreak comes all too soon
gulls at work again

© petra domina

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Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for hosting Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

Comments

  1. Yamini MacLeanJune 21, 2021 at 6:27 PM

    Hari OM
    &*) ... that last line brought it altogether beautifully! YAM xx

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    1. JaniceJune 23, 2021 at 11:33 PM

      Well, I tried to bring it full circle. namaste, janice xx

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  2. TournesolJune 23, 2021 at 8:23 PM

    I love your troiku, Janice!! the gulls sure take over a seashore, don't they sometimes? Sending you hugs...getting my 2nd vaccine this Friday...finally!

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    1. JaniceJune 23, 2021 at 11:32 PM

      Thank you. So glad you are getting that second shot! Enjoy a bit more freedom now.

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  3. SkyJune 26, 2021 at 7:46 PM

    As if I was there already... I like your troiku!

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  4. Adas AlcoveAugust 1, 2021 at 11:47 AM

    wonderful job bringing it full circle. Lovely troiku!

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