candle light

Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight



instantly
flaming candles fill the sky
a new year


instantly
warm lips meet
melting the cold

flaming candles fill the sky
smoke fills the air
stars obscured

a new year
corks pop as flutes clink
a sea of people

© petra domina


To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work:

"Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops".

Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year.

Here are the two haiku to work with:

a new year
rising from wild seas
a few stars

filling
the glass with candlelight
champagne

© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)

Champagne and Candlelight (© photo Isabella Cabre)

Two beautiful haiku by the Queen of Haiku (and Tanka), Jane Reichhold. She was once my co-host and taught me a lot about all kinds of Japanese poetry ... I miss her still."











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