sea cliffs

Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #88 Crossroads ... Sea Cliffs


The challenge from our host, Chèvrefeuille, is to fuse the following two haiku into one.  Then create a troiku from the fusion.  Here are the two haiku to use for your "fusion-haiku":

coming to sea cliffs
the off-shore breeze raises
a flower fragrance

curving with the land
a rainbow of clouds
moves out to sea

© Jane Reichhold (Taken from: "A Dictionary of Haiku", a Modern Saijiki)

sea cliffs
awash with flower fragrance
rainbow mist forms

  sea cliffs
  rise above the pounding surf
  puffin nests

     awash
     with flower fragrance
     humble trellis

        rainbow mist forms
        papa puffin dives for food
        sea cliff nursery

            © petra domina

Not a puffin 😁


Comments

  1. Hari OM
    Lovely flow - but that first one nails it! YAM xx

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    1. Glad you liked it, YAM. namaste, janice xx

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  2. Very nice Troiku Janice. It flows like the mists. A wonderful tribute to Jane.

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