hot springs

welling up
from Mother Earth
her warm fluids

©  petra domina

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  1. UnknownFebruary 27, 2017 at 10:17 PM

    So many layers in these three line...love this, Janice!

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  2. Yamini MacLeanFebruary 28, 2017 at 12:14 AM

    Hari om
    Luscious!!! YAMxx

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  3. UnknownFebruary 28, 2017 at 2:04 AM

    Is a very nice way to see mother earth. One shared by a few different tribal peoples.

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    1. JaniceFebruary 28, 2017 at 7:04 PM

      Thanks, Hamish. I'll have to take your word for it on the different tribes!

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  4. UnknownFebruary 28, 2017 at 2:04 AM

    Is a very nice way to see mother earth. One shared by a few different tribal peoples.

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  5. Kim M. RussellFebruary 28, 2017 at 2:50 AM

    A lovely idea, Janice, like going back to the womb of Mother Earth.

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  6. B i r g i t t aFebruary 28, 2017 at 6:12 AM

    splendid expressed!

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  7. Nicole PottierFebruary 28, 2017 at 7:11 AM

    Beautiful !

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2017 at 4:55 PM

    I like this one, as many others before, but I'm rarely logged in so I don't comment. I just realised that it is possible to leave a comment without it.

    Sky

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    1. JaniceFebruary 28, 2017 at 7:06 PM

      Thanks, Sky. And thanks for taking time to comment.

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleMarch 3, 2017 at 11:10 PM

    Very nicely crafted Janice. In this haiku are several layers hidden. You did an awesome job.

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    1. JaniceMarch 4, 2017 at 11:47 AM

      Thank you, Kristjaan. You are the credit as I have learned so much from you.

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