the sound of rain

Carpe Diem Only The First Line #25 the sound of rain

the sound of rain
drowned by the crashing thunder
storm front blows through

©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

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  1. Adas AlcoveFebruary 13, 2017 at 8:59 PM

    Nicely done!

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    1. JaniceFebruary 13, 2017 at 11:37 PM

      Storms passing through tonight so just wrote what nature handed me!

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  2. Yamini MacLeanFebruary 13, 2017 at 11:12 PM

    Hari OM
    The sound of rain
    brings Aussies' sighs of relief
    Bush fires still burn...

    Close to heart here today PD/JA... YAM xx

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  3. Kim M. RussellFebruary 14, 2017 at 4:04 AM

    gentle rain and overpowering thunder - the frisson of a thunderstorm encapsulated in a haiku!

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  4. TournesolFebruary 14, 2017 at 9:18 PM

    What a great haiku describing a violent thunder storm.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2017 at 9:29 PM

    Could feel the power of the storm

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  6. Fascinating QuestFebruary 21, 2017 at 10:05 AM

    I can feel the thunder through your words, Janice. Good one :)

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