Kema
Carpe Diem #1160 Kema, birth-place of Yosa Buson
snow melt
eternally
falling
© petra domina
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waiting for autumn
Carpe Diem #1227 waiting for autumn (Aki tikashi, Aki wo matsu) in the summer heat perching black birds pant waiting for autumn © petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
Hari om
ReplyDeleteSimple perfection. YAM xx
You are took to me, YAM, namaste janice xx
DeleteBeautiful ! I love this sense of eternity that you put just in the middle of the haiku. It's all about this second verse.
ReplyDeleteSo pleased you enjoyed! namaste
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteSometimes the simplest and shortest ku say so much...love this, Janice!
ReplyDeleteWorking in minimalism. Cannot get much shorter!
DeleteYaha! You're going minimalist!
ReplyDeleteYes! But is it still getting the point across?
DeleteCool, yes.
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DeleteOkay ... it's very clear ... Santoka Taneda's "ghost" has caught you Janice. This minimalistic free-style is really awesome and you are starting to become a master in it.
ReplyDeleteOH, my, such high words from my master! namaste, janice
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