first leaf falling

Carpe Diem #1800 New Beginnings ... first leaf falling


breezy morn
silently first red leaf falls
moon set 

© petra domina

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  1. Kim M. RussellJanuary 20, 2020 at 2:20 AM

    So much to see in so few words!

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    1. JaniceJanuary 20, 2020 at 11:17 PM

      Thanks, Kim. I love to use fewer words when possible.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanJanuary 20, 2020 at 5:32 AM

    Hari OM
    An entire scene! YAM xx

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    1. JaniceJanuary 20, 2020 at 11:18 PM

      Yep. Took a while to come up with it. namasts, janice xx

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  3. carol l mckennaJanuary 20, 2020 at 9:39 AM

    Lovely haiku ~ love the leaf falling ~ ^_^

    Happy Moments to You,
    A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Adas AlcoveJanuary 20, 2020 at 7:28 PM

    Lovely scenic poem!

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