leaves float away

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #9 leaves float away (Dolores Fegan)



autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away

© Dolores

on the coolest of breezes
into the moonlight night

© petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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  1. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMay 15, 2017 at 1:18 AM

    A beautiful completion.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanMay 15, 2017 at 3:31 AM

    Hari OM
    this made me sigh... YAM xx

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    1. JaniceMay 15, 2017 at 10:59 AM

      The first line came to mind immediately. The second was not far behind. Strange how that works at times. Pleased it spoke to you. Namaste Janice xx

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  3. Gillena CoxMay 15, 2017 at 11:15 AM

    in both verses the hints of motion and animation, luv it

    much love...

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    1. JaniceMay 15, 2017 at 9:49 PM

      Delores wrote a beautiful haiku setting a high mark for any completions. xx janice

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  4. Adas AlcoveMay 15, 2017 at 5:42 PM

    Nicely done!

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  5. kaykualaMay 15, 2017 at 9:06 PM

    Forays into a moonlit sky can be most mesmerizing, Janice! Wonderful write!

    Hank

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  6. TournesolMay 17, 2017 at 5:12 PM

    This made me sigh as well! beautifully written, Janice.

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    1. JaniceMay 17, 2017 at 11:27 PM

      Delores did the hard work. My muse did the rest. Glad you enjoyed.

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  7. JaniceMay 17, 2017 at 11:27 PM

    thanks

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