an autumn leaf
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #10 an autumn leaf (Ryokan Taigu)
The "hokku" you have to use today is Ryokan's Jisei (death-poem):
ura wo mise omote wo misete chiru momiji
now it reveals its hidden side
and now the other—thus it falls,
an autumn leaf
© Ryokan Taigu
in all its beauty free falling
. . . into eternity
© petra domina
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
A beautiful conclusion, and so perfect for a jisei.
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