leaves float away
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #9 leaves float away (Dolores Fegan)
autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away
© Dolores
on the coolest of breezes
into the moonlight night
© petra domina
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
A beautiful completion.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeletethis made me sigh... YAM xx
The first line came to mind immediately. The second was not far behind. Strange how that works at times. Pleased it spoke to you. Namaste Janice xx
Deletein both verses the hints of motion and animation, luv it
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Delores wrote a beautiful haiku setting a high mark for any completions. xx janice
DeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteI bow in your presence.
DeleteForays into a moonlit sky can be most mesmerizing, Janice! Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you, Hank.
DeleteThis made me sigh as well! beautifully written, Janice.
ReplyDeleteDelores did the hard work. My muse did the rest. Glad you enjoyed.
Deletethanks
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