seed

Carpe Diem #1120 Seed

bury
spread ... stretch
grow
with love's
warmth

©  petra domina



Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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  1. Pat RJanuary 10, 2017 at 10:52 PM

    Lively, Janice.

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  2. kaykualaJanuary 11, 2017 at 4:30 AM

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  3. kaykualaJanuary 11, 2017 at 4:33 AM

    Love's warmth can be therapeutic! Yes, Janice!

    Hank

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  4. B i r g i t t aJanuary 11, 2017 at 8:45 AM

    compact and concise :)

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  5. Cressida de NovaJanuary 11, 2017 at 8:53 AM

    Indeed !

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  6. UnknownJanuary 11, 2017 at 10:38 AM

    Very nice
    .minimalist...however...this is a haiku for me..I think two full lines of conclusion would elevate your thought you were expressing, or take further..

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    1. JaniceJanuary 11, 2017 at 11:31 AM

      I am experimenting with the fewest words possible. I need to see if better vocabulary could expand the thought. Always appreciate your guidance, Hamish!

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  7. UnknownJanuary 11, 2017 at 10:43 AM

    Very nice
    .minimalist...however...this is a haiku for me..I think two full lines of conclusion would elevate your thought you were expressing, or take further..

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  8. Adas AlcoveJanuary 11, 2017 at 11:32 AM

    Simplistic and beautiful!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2017 at 9:17 PM

    Lovely

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  10. Kim M. RussellJanuary 13, 2017 at 4:09 AM

    I coudl just picture a seed - that is so sweet!

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 23, 2017 at 12:36 AM

    A nice "minimal" tanka, a bit like Santoka Taneda, who was a haiku poet of the so called "free-style"

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    1. JaniceJanuary 23, 2017 at 10:13 PM

      An experiment on what can be done with the fewest words. thanks for stopping by!

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