autumn
Carpe Diem Special #219 Dolores' 3rd colorful mushrooms
fields
filled with colorful warriors
falling leaves
© petra domina
"We are encountering autumn in a few days (or spring if you live on the Southern hemisphere) and in these haiku by Dolores I really sense the beauty of departure, letting go, release ....:
colorful mushrooms
within the decaying tree
new life from old
leaves and clouds
race the setting sun
across the lake
sounds of summer fade
crisp air echoes with crickets
and crunch of dry leaves
sunlight dances
on the back of autumn trees
leaves spiral downward
© Dolores of Ada's Poetry Alcove"
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Hari OM
ReplyDeleteYes, that captures the scene perfectly! YAM xx
Why, thank you, YAM. janice xx
DeleteBeautiful post Janice. Really liked the build up with the prose. The haiku was full of atmosphere and spent time thinking if there was deeper mesning behind fallibg leaves.
ReplyDeleteI posted a comment on this post by Chev as I noticed less participants on the post with haiku by Dolires and Ese. Such a shame. Ah well.
Glad you enjoyed this one, Hamish. My husband and I have been attending our step grandson's American football games the last couple of weeks. He took a hit last night that took him out of the rest of the game. So, yes, the colorful warriors do fall like leaves at times. Thanks for your kind encouragement.
DeleteBeautiful post Janice. Really liked the build up with the prose. The haiku was full of atmosphere and spent time thinking if there was deeper mesning behind fallibg leaves.
ReplyDeleteI posted a comment on this post by Chev as I noticed less participants on the post with haiku by Dolires and Ese. Such a shame. Ah well.
How different it is from city to city, country to country. Here girls are busy with hockey, rugby or ringet and boys hockey and rugby.
ReplyDeleteYes, differences. Of course there are girls occupied with soccer, cross country and other sports. But cheering is still really big.
DeleteOh, no. That would be a pain. When I was in high school one could see a string of car lights heading toward the football fields. Treeless flat lands make for long views!
ReplyDeleteSportsman compared with colorful leaves and extraordinary way to describe autumn Janice, but I like it.
ReplyDeleteWe really do not get the changing leaves here in central Texas. But football with all the different team colors is about the only thing that says fall here!
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