Mmm beautiful, and powerful in the reading. The concept has made you produce one of your finest: simple, yet with such depth, and for me real poetic imagery. So nice.
Been working on it for several days before I saw the path prompt. It sprouted from an observation I made to my husband about how far it seemed the first time we went to a certain location but how close it seemed now. I told him there is a haiku in that.
Hari OM ...and writing poetry of any kind is like that; seems to take forever and then, in a flash, it's there! A delight to wander with you "Petra"! YAM xx
interesting in its argument of known and unknown; its like the returning along the journey travelled the psychology of shortened time Paloma thank you for dropping in at my Sunday Lime today
Carpe Diem Theme Week #4 (5 & 6): Latifa Prayer lines 4 & 5 "I believe and I trust" & "I let go" Introduction: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Both lines are in the middle of the Latifa Prayer and that's no coincidence I think, because these two lines belong (in a way) together. To "let go", you have to "believe and trust" that it will become okay. Without believe and trust you cannot let go. my response - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Have you ever done one of those team building exercises? You know where you close your eyes and fall backwards into the waiting arms of the other members? We did this with a group of kids we sponsored. It went fine and no one hit the floor. In my insane mind I decided to just randomly fall into my husbands arms. He always caught me. We were in our twenties at the time. While visiting with our neighbors on their patio, once more I fell into my husband's waiting arms. ...
Mmm beautiful, and powerful in the reading. The concept has made you produce one of your finest: simple, yet with such depth, and for me real poetic imagery. So nice.
ReplyDeleteBeen working on it for several days before I saw the path prompt. It sprouted from an observation I made to my husband about how far it seemed the first time we went to a certain location but how close it seemed now. I told him there is a haiku in that.
DeleteReminiscent of Robert Frost!
ReplyDeleteOh, my. Never thought of that.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDelete...and writing poetry of any kind is like that; seems to take forever and then, in a flash, it's there! A delight to wander with you "Petra"! YAM xx
Good Evening, YAM
DeleteA delight to have you along on the journey! janice xx
interesting in its argument of known and unknown; its like the returning along the journey travelled the psychology of shortened time
ReplyDeletePaloma thank you for dropping in at my Sunday Lime today
much love...
Thanks, Gillena.
DeleteMy son points out how long it was between Christmases for a five year old since it was 20% of their life. Then at 50, only 2%.
A very nice result Janice. I really like this:)
ReplyDeleteThanks, JT
DeleteA very nice result Janice. I really like this:)
ReplyDeleteNew paths to explore ... nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by, Kristjaan.
DeleteJust something we noticed as we passed a football field one evening.
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