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Thursday, May 12, 2016

the cool breeze

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 13th: "the cool breeze" by Onitsura


the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree 


© Onitsura
And I (Chèvrefeuille) have tried to create the second stanza to make the scene complete, but I don't know if I have succeeded.
Sunrise on the Danube, 4-3-2016

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree
              © Onitsura


a symphony of nature's music
skylarks join in praising the Lord 
     © Chèvrefeuille
   
 


Here is the petra domina attempt:

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree  
© Onitsura

while the young doe gives birth to
a pair of spotted fawns .

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

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