the cool breeze

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 13th: "the cool breeze" by Onitsura


the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree 

© Onitsura
And I (Chèvrefeuille) have tried to create the second stanza to make the scene complete, but I don't know if I have succeeded.
Sunrise on the Danube, 4-3-2016

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree              © Onitsura

a symphony of nature's music
skylarks join in praising the Lord      © Chèvrefeuille    

Here is the petra domina attempt:

 the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine tree  © Onitsura

 while the young doe gives birth to
a pair of spotted fawns .

 ©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


Comments

  1. Yamini MacLeanMay 12, 2016 at 4:07 PM

    Hari OM
    Springtime music... YAM xx

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  2. Petru J ViljoenMay 13, 2016 at 1:40 PM

    Fitting and beautifully so.

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  3. TournesolDansUnJardinMay 13, 2016 at 11:32 PM

    Ah!! such a lovely image, Janice!

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  4. Forest BatherMay 14, 2016 at 2:24 AM

    Close to nature and the wonderful wirkings of nature. Shows your heart through your description

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    1. JaniceMay 15, 2016 at 7:18 PM

      nature is all one grand experience. i appreciate your words!

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleMay 16, 2016 at 7:13 PM

    A tribute full of love ... Mother Nature needs us. Great springtime feeling.

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