Wednesday, May 17, 2017

dandelion

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #12 dandelion, dandelion (Ogiwara Seisensui)


Here is the "hokku" to work with today:

dandelion dandelion
on the sandy beach
spring opens its eyes

© Ogiwara Seisensui

stretching leaf covered arms she
yawns, exhales a floral breath

©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

18 comments:

  1. Love the 'floral breath' Janice!

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    1. Great! I thought it gave a different feel.

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  2. Hari OM
    A real sense of springing life in your words! YAM xx

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  3. Nice, I Luv that stretching, S nice lazy mood, let Season linger

    Much love...

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    1. Nothing like a good stretch to get one going.

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  4. Like a forest fairy rising

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  5. Oh, gorgeous – an unexpected take on it.

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  6. yawns, exhales a floral breath

    It has a personality of its own. Nice way of saying it Janice!

    Hank

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  7. Good morning world...spring awakens!

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    1. Yes, she awoke. In some places she has been a little grumpy with the tornadoes.

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  8. The breath of nature ... really a nice continuation Janice.

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