South Padre Island

South Padre Island

Saturday, May 14, 2016

feeling alone



Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month May 15th "feeling alone" by Yozakura



feeling alone 
in the woods around Edo 
just the autumn wind       
© Yozakura (1640-1716)

through the bare branches
I see the dragon-kites       
© Chèvrefeuille

feeling alone 
in the woods around Edo 
just the autumn wind        
© Yozakura (1640-1716)

the single leaf tumbles by
searching for a pile of friends   ©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


11 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    OH yes, that continues the evocation of autumn! YAM xx

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    1. And autumn in itself reeks of loneliness. xx

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    1. not usually what I lead with according to my son ; )

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  3. Your stanza makes the loneliness very strong ... nicely done.

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    1. Loneliness is someting I observed in my Mom MIL after my Dad's an FIL's passing. They neither felt at peace again.

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