waiting for autumn
Carpe Diem #1227 waiting for autumn (Aki tikashi, Aki wo matsu) in the summer heat perching black birds pant waiting for autumn © petra domina Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
This folkloric haiku is wonderful in it's simplicity, but it echoes vivid truth. I remember nights this in the desert....
ReplyDeleteMy Granny would entertain me as we fell asleep in her flannel sheeted bed with stories of old.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteA gem to decorate the new year! YAM xx
Thank you, YAM. It was all the muse would say! namaste, janice
DeleteI love the simple truth of your haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kim. I think I a ready to write again for the first time in a while.
DeleteSimplicity to the max
ReplyDeleteSort of a challenge within the challenge
DeleteSimple, lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteI really like to see how few words I can use and still convey a thought. thanks for the comment.
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