Friday, January 5, 2018

Revise That Haiku

Carpe Diem Weekend-meditation #14 Revise That Haiku


chi ni taore   me ni yori hana no   wakare kana

falling to the ground
a flower closer to the root
bidding farewell

© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)


tears flow
falling to the ground
autumn leaves


© Chèvrefeuille

knees buckled
under the weight of grief
dove departs

©  petra domina


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI