Carpe Diem #1804 New Beginnings ... candlelight instantly flaming candles fill the sky a new year instantly warm lips meet melting the cold flaming candles fill the sky smoke fills the air stars obscured a new year corks pop as flutes clink a sea of people © petra domina To anyone who stops by for a read the following was the challenge for today's work: "Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers, Yes ... another episode of our wonderful Kai, because I was late with our Monday episode, "snowdrops". Today I love to challenge you two times. I love to challenge you to create a "fusion-ku" with two given haiku and to create a Troiku with your new "fusion-ku". I have chosen two haiku by Jane Reichhold extracted from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", section New Year. Here are the two haiku to work with: a new year rising from wild seas a few stars filling the glass with candlelight champ
Changing the focus from the old man to the tree was a good choice. It turned out well!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cie. That was actually my first thought.
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ReplyDeleteYup, that worked! YAM xx
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DeleteI like this perspective!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim.
DeleteA shift in perspective; Nice.
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P.S. mine is #10 at the Linky
Nice re-work, with old growth bringing about new.
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