Hari OMMy word... from loom to room!!! YAM xx
Yep! janice xx, namaste
I an feel the energy, and also think 'fingers' should not be used twice so yes, the t a nka is powerful, but a touch more editing.
I an not sure I like the feel of hands as a replacement for fingers. Will leave it there for a bit while I contemplate the scene.
Sensuality caught in a beautiful Tanka
Well silk= sensual.
Aah! Love it☺. Nice work.