Thursday, February 8, 2018

silk

Carpe Diem #1365 Silk



with nimble fingers
fine silk cloth is woven
the sash is loosened
hands trembling
frenzied anticipation
©  petra domina

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CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI 

8 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    My word... from loom to room!!! YAM xx

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  2. I an feel the energy, and also think 'fingers' should not be used twice so yes, the t a nka is powerful, but a touch more editing.

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    1. I an not sure I like the feel of hands as a replacement for fingers. Will leave it there for a bit while I contemplate the scene.

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  3. Sensuality caught in a beautiful Tanka

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