silk
Carpe Diem #1365 Silk
with nimble fingers
fine silk cloth is woven
the sash is loosened
hands trembling
frenzied anticipation
heart
Carpe Diem #941 Heart The blue-eyed, blond haired boy stole my heart when he was just a kicking fetus. The love continued to grow as we watched him coo, then talk his special talk. Grandaddy, (Nandad) always let him play with the tool box. Screwdrivers were i-dikers. Caboose was bagoose. The Playskool Tyke Bike was and is nooden-nooden. When looking for someone, he would say their name in a sing song, quizzical fashion while shaking his head in a negative fashion. He now uses words he learned during his college and grad school years two decades ago. These words are not nearly as fun as those precious made up toddler words. thunderclap acts as a bossy stormhorn rainbrella time! © Janice 'petra domina' Adcock Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteMy word... from loom to room!!! YAM xx
Yep! janice xx, namaste
DeleteI an feel the energy, and also think 'fingers' should not be used twice so yes, the t a nka is powerful, but a touch more editing.
ReplyDeleteI an not sure I like the feel of hands as a replacement for fingers. Will leave it there for a bit while I contemplate the scene.
DeleteSensuality caught in a beautiful Tanka
ReplyDeleteWell silk= sensual.
DeleteAah! Love it☺. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
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