silk

Carpe Diem #1365 Silk



with nimble fingers
fine silk cloth is woven
the sash is loosened
hands trembling
frenzied anticipation
©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI 

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  1. Yamini MacLeanFebruary 9, 2018 at 5:47 AM

    Hari OM
    My word... from loom to room!!! YAM xx

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  2. ForestbatherFebruary 9, 2018 at 3:27 PM

    I an feel the energy, and also think 'fingers' should not be used twice so yes, the t a nka is powerful, but a touch more editing.

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    1. JaniceFebruary 9, 2018 at 3:40 PM

      I an not sure I like the feel of hands as a replacement for fingers. Will leave it there for a bit while I contemplate the scene.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 10, 2018 at 3:55 PM

    Sensuality caught in a beautiful Tanka

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  4. Pat RFebruary 11, 2018 at 11:38 PM

    Aah! Love it☺. Nice work.

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