Monday, March 6, 2017

existentialism and flutes




Carpe Diem #1168 

flute

breath
of a lion
fluttering
butterflies
and flags

©  petra domina

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15 comments:

  1. Beautiful Janice. Santoka Taneda's "free-style" used in a tanka. Nicely done.

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    1. Almost did it this way:

      breath of a lion
      fluttering butterflies
      and flags

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  2. Simplicity and free style. Lovely.

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  3. Oh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff.
    My comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!

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    1. Thanks for taking tie to stop in to read, enjoy and comment. Some days the gloves fit and others they do not!

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  4. Oh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff.
    My comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!

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  5. Conveys well the feel, in not so many words!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks for the visit and kind comment.
      Janice

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