Oh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff. My comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!
Oh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff. My comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!
Carpe Diem Theme Week #4 (5 & 6): Latifa Prayer lines 4 & 5 "I believe and I trust" & "I let go" Introduction: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Both lines are in the middle of the Latifa Prayer and that's no coincidence I think, because these two lines belong (in a way) together. To "let go", you have to "believe and trust" that it will become okay. Without believe and trust you cannot let go. my response - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Have you ever done one of those team building exercises? You know where you close your eyes and fall backwards into the waiting arms of the other members? We did this with a group of kids we sponsored. It went fine and no one hit the floor. In my insane mind I decided to just randomly fall into my husbands arms. He always caught me. We were in our twenties at the time. While visiting with our neighbors on their patio, once more I fell into my husband's waiting arms. ...
Lovely lion, Janice :)
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DeleteLove this one Janice!
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DeleteBeautiful Janice. Santoka Taneda's "free-style" used in a tanka. Nicely done.
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fluttering butterflies
and flags
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteA fine tune!!! YAM xx
Thank you, namaste janice xx
DeleteSimplicity and free style. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rall.
DeleteOh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff.
ReplyDeleteMy comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!
Thanks for taking tie to stop in to read, enjoy and comment. Some days the gloves fit and others they do not!
DeleteOh Janice when you write like that I sm floored...totally seduced. O have to catch up with reading your pieces - you used minimalism again but here it fits like a glove. It is a sincere joy reading good stuff.
ReplyDeleteMy comment looks like it is in Persian style, but was spontaineous!
Conveys well the feel, in not so many words!
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Thanks for the visit and kind comment.
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