Hari OMOh my...poor guy! YAM xx
It happens. janice xx
Poignant petals on that rosy path, Janice.
Yes, they are, Kim.
Too often these days.
Yes, a poignant piece..
I thought the prompt poetry had that feeling, too.
she walked in white illusionif only love had been thereLove can take different forms under various pretexts.Hank
Yes, it can. Janice
Was just thinking about all the folks who had made it to 50 years together.
Sad,yes but beautifully written. Now what if this were a woman talking about her loss...in solitudewrapped in erotic memoirsa daisy petal pathhe walked in empty promisesshe never expected love.
Ooooo, good one!
Wow ... a wonderful tanka Janice.
As we prepare to celebrate our 50th wedding anniversary the end of this month a reread of this makes me feel so fortunate. Glad you appreciated the tanka.