celebration
Carpe Diem weekend-meditation #4
Soliloquy no renga (solo-renga):
Celebration
celebration
finally winter has gone
early plum blossoms
© Chèvrefeuille
delicately frosted
by last evening's snowfall
morning sun
melting winter's breath
droplets forming
drip, drip, dripping
into a light filled puddle
each drop
spreading the light
concentric circles
rippling toward the puddle's edge
tiny waves on a small sea
warmth of sun
awakening those hibernating
the frog wriggles
from the the muddy depths
squinting in the bright light
raspy croaking
searching for the right note
to win her heart
bringing his deepest tone
his bellows filling the air
plumb clouds at sunset
bring a chill as night falls
across the old pond
petals zigzags to the pond
confetti celebration
Absolutely fantastic. The details in this tale of spring and rebirth bring this wonderful piece alive!
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much, Lolly.
DeleteLove the image you draw with your words...
ReplyDeleteI just was thinking about the pond we had in our back yard before we moved. We had a couple of frogs that would announce spring.
DeleteThis is gorgeous writing. Well done !
ReplyDeletethank you so very much
DeleteI like the confetti celebration :D
ReplyDeleteI love the images that come to mind while working on a challenge.
DeleteExtraordinary beautiful soliloquy no renga Janice. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYour teaching makes such a difference.
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