It's amazing how brief a haiku can be and still hold much meaning. I feel you capture the image both as a viewer and from the boy's perspective. Janice (ontheland)
Thank you for your very kind comment. Janice (the rock lady, aka petra domina)
I agree with Janice:)
Excellent "free-style" haiku Janice Santoka Taneda would be happy if he could read this one.
Thank you so very, very much. High praise from my master.