Sunday, May 14, 2017

leaves float away

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #9 leaves float away (Dolores Fegan)



autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away

© Dolores

on the coolest of breezes
into the moonlight night

© petra domina


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

14 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    this made me sigh... YAM xx

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    1. The first line came to mind immediately. The second was not far behind. Strange how that works at times. Pleased it spoke to you. Namaste Janice xx

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  2. in both verses the hints of motion and animation, luv it

    much love...

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    1. Delores wrote a beautiful haiku setting a high mark for any completions. xx janice

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  3. Forays into a moonlit sky can be most mesmerizing, Janice! Wonderful write!

    Hank

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  4. This made me sigh as well! beautifully written, Janice.

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    1. Delores did the hard work. My muse did the rest. Glad you enjoyed.

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